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Crop to 8x10 and cloned out a couple of people on the left side of the frame
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Armando

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I like this very much.  

 

A couple of suggestions - perhaps crop so that the subject is less central.  And there is a bright area just outside the right of her face - maybe part of a window frame?  Darkening that might remove the distraction.

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very good background handling. very deep perspective though which, I feel, puts some distortion on her head form...


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Thanks for the comments! trully appreciate them

 

Here is another version
- darkened the bright spot, yes it is a window frame, right on the side of her face, brush with automask,

- cloned out the lights

- cropped a part from the right, not sure I like it better, I miss the walkway under the trees

 

Frank, this is shot with the 50mm , I shot from about hip height, not sure what can be deforming her head, and by good background handling, you mean the out of focus, the exposure, or both ?

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Armando

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Thanks, I like this - but ultimately it is your choice as the photographer!

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Frank, this is shot with the 50mm , I shot from about hip height, not sure what can be deforming her head, and by good background handling, you mean the out of focus, the exposure, or both ?

 

 

Background handling I mean the lines and shapes and where her head resides in this construction.

 

I feel a portrait from below breats height is always difficult geometrically. Therefore I like portraits with camera on eye height, except for walking people a bit further away


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